"Evaluations"

When I was writing my review for Professor Andy's class I thought that I was doing a pretty good job. But after reading the two articles from the text book I changed my mind.. For one thing I don't think that I was critical enough. One of the things that made those two articles so good was the fact that the authors told exactly how they felt without holding anything back. They were very descriptive about how they felt too. They definitely made me think twice about the paper that I ad written and now I basically feel like I was too soft on my review. I need to follow the examples of these two writers a little more where they came up with original and personal opinions on their topics and stuck to them the entire paper. And even if there was on thing that they did not like they could still like it a lot as a whole. I especially like the Harry Potter review because the author pointed out a lot of things that weren't too good about the movie without trashing the book because despite the fact that they have the same titles, they are two different pieces entirely, and the producer of the movie and J. K. Rowling are two different people. This really made me happy because I am not a huge fan of the movies but the books are amazing.